Hi trey it is Olive, I like how you described the palace really well, It really helped me paint a picture in my head! maybe you could say at the start what kind of stone it is.
Hi Trey its me your Best friend I like how you described the palace next time you could of taken a screenshot of the palace so we can see what your talking about, but anyway good job
Hi trey it is Olive,
ReplyDeleteI like how you described the palace really well, It really helped me paint a picture in my head!
maybe you could say at the start what kind of stone it is.
Hi Trey its me your Best friend I like how you described the palace next time you could of taken a screenshot of the palace so we can see what your talking about, but anyway good job
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